This course blog is where we communicate as a group, share responses to assignments, and post our work. You are required to publish posts according to assignments found on Moodle, and are encouraged to share images, make comments, and pose public questions throughout the semester.
Just doing a quick image search, there are tons of images made from these stocks, it looks like, and I wonder if you could have made a few more active decisions about your own version. The inclusion of the clock is really cool and is layered successfully behind the mountain range. This is a small change, but a pretty tedious one, to get the mountain edge to be a clean as possible, yet still maintain its organic jaggedness. Otherwise, there is so much that could be done with such a remarkable and spacious area of reflection! Perhaps include the reflection of the clock, at least? It's a captivating image overall, and your PS work appears to be technically fluid, I just think your creative choices could have been more engaged and apparent.
Just doing a quick image search, there are tons of images made from these stocks, it looks like, and I wonder if you could have made a few more active decisions about your own version. The inclusion of the clock is really cool and is layered successfully behind the mountain range. This is a small change, but a pretty tedious one, to get the mountain edge to be a clean as possible, yet still maintain its organic jaggedness. Otherwise, there is so much that could be done with such a remarkable and spacious area of reflection! Perhaps include the reflection of the clock, at least? It's a captivating image overall, and your PS work appears to be technically fluid, I just think your creative choices could have been more engaged and apparent.
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